Friday, December 3, 2010

do-over

Sorry the last post turned out to be a flop. :(

I have another poem in my head... needing to get out... so here goes.

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walking alone. in the rain.
people passing by.
walking alone. feeling pain.
falling from the sky.

standing alone. far away.
sun begins to shine.
standing alone. another day.
hope shall become mine.
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that's all I have for now - more verses might come later.
hehe, now I feel like e. e. cummings :P

3 comments:

  1. well written, and relevant. Now just waiting for that second verse to kick in....

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  2. ^^ What he said! We may have an album before long :-)

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  3. Thanks, Michael and Mac. :) Album - haha! That would be pretty cool though.

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